I find the forgeting to jump a bit to implausible for me. I could see tripping or slipping but to just not jump completely pulled me out of the story.
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MapleSyrupDevourerOfKnowledge
I find the forgeting to jump a bit to implausible for me. I could see tripping or slipping but to just not jump completely pulled me out of the story.